[Jaljr]

Mornin friends –

Here are three reads for an upcoming narration coaching session
Brevard College Admission video
JFK and Vanderbilt are tours

All lightly edited. Thanks for your comments

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[Jaljr]

Hi, Grace

All great reads
Blue Angels could use more excitement and drive
Covideo is good as a conversational instruction piece. Very relatable
Space Camp is the best of the three for me. Grabs the listener and pulls them in.
Good work

[Jaljr]

Hello all –

Here are some reads for my narration coaching sessions today. If you have time take a listen. All feedback appreciated. They are VERY lightly edited. Mainly focused on the read and not the finished product. Thanks

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[Jaljr]

Hey Audrea
Great reads
Pitch to close had the right tone and tempo for my ear and was engaging to keep the listener moving
The spa telephony sounded just right
Words needs some more variety in tone and pitch. I wasn’t sure of the mood you were trying to set.

[Jaljr]

The Allstate read had the feeling of you putting an arm around the listener and showing them how to achieve their life goals. Good, intimate read. Drew the listener in…

Advil was good as well. Clearly explaining the product and its benefits in an authoritative tone in what felt like a tough script to read.

Thanks for these

[Jaljr]

These were really good. Created urgency in the ad without raising your voice while still getting the message out. I liked both.

[Jaljr]

Great reads, Joe!! Definitely conversational.
Both should have a wide eyed feel (for different reasons lol). I liked the earth origin read better.

[Jaljr]

Hey, Lance – great read. That feels like a tough script to get the message across while still sounding “friendly and experienced.” You got them both though. I agree that the tempo felt slow. But you gotta hit the points in the script and make them all sound important

[Jaljr]

Yeah…I liked the second read as well. It had an extra measure of swagger that the first read lacked. Tough to get capture “too cool for school” in 10 secs, but I think you got it. Great read!!

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