[Jaljr]

Hey, Veronica –

Welcome aboard! those were good reads, especially the Phonics . I agree that you should read that one with a big smile. You have a good voice. I look forward to hearing more.

JAL

[Jaljr]

Hello, friends –

Here are a couple more commercial reads for an upcoming coaching session. All feedback appreciated.

Have a great holiday!!

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[Jaljr]

Hey Tati –

I liked the first of the two reads better. I have found that when one reads a script like this, you really need to envision someone on the other end, listening to your good work so that you can make it more conversational. Great job

[Jaljr]

Hey, Ryan –

Both good reads. The Reeve script felt a little fast, but otherwise did well in drawing the listener in.
on the meditation script, I was going to say that it needed to be more relaxed, but then you made me inhale for 8 counts, etc. Although that feels like forever on the read, it was effective in getting the listener to do exactly what you were reading. nice job.

[Jaljr]

Hello, friends –

Here are two lightly edited commercial reads for an upcoming coaching session. All comments appreciated.

JAL

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[Jaljr]

Thanks very much. Very helpful

[Jaljr]

Evenin, friends
Here are a couple of lightly edited commercial reads for an upcoming coaching session.

All comments and feedback welcome

Thanks

Jerry

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[Jaljr]

Hello, Nikka

Good job on all. The redo on the activity TV spot was on the mark. I could hear the excitement and see the smile. The tone on the Shakespeare read was good as well and fit the topic.

Great reads. Thanks for posting

[Jaljr]

Evenin, friends –

Here are a couple of reads for an upcoming narration coaching session – both lightly edited.
Would be grateful for your comments.

Be well…

JAL

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[Jaljr]

Hey, Dominic-
Both great reads!
On Badger, may consider reading as if you are actually watching the badgers. Make the grassland and prairies sound as large as they really are.
Clarins is the better of the two in my ears. Good tone…conversational yet authoritative.

Nice job!

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