[Jahna Bobolia]

Hey Keith, I thought the Campbells copy was right on point. Pacing was good, warm. It sounded lovely. My only suggestion would be to take the pause out after Introducing at the beginning of the piece.

[Jahna Bobolia]

Hey Talia, These both sound great! Great pace, clear diction, nice and conversational! My only suggestion would be for the Phillips commercial there is a pause at the beginning right after you say At Phillips. Maybe you could play with how the line would sound if you took out the pause. Great work! I have a Tilex commercial on here that I am working on my take 1 and take 2’s. Would love your feedback if you have a chance.

[Jahna Bobolia]

Hi! Lovely voice! both commercials sounded strong with pacing, diction, delivery. My only suggestion, I would be careful of pauses after periods. I think maybe in the Cheerios commercial your pacing was lovely then a period would hit and a pause would occur.

[Jahna Bobolia]

Hi! I agree great read! Very conversational and easy going. I also agree with Michelle just gives those /d/s a little attention at the end of cold.

[Jahna Bobolia]

Hey Everyone! I am giving it another try with the take 1 and take 2. Going for conversational in both however my “who” changes. Do you hear a difference in the takes?

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Hey Everyone! I am giving it another try with the take 1 and take 2. Going for conversational in both however my “who” changes. Do you hear a difference in the takes?

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[Jahna Bobolia]

Hi! I really enjoyed the Yellowstone read. I thought the pacing was good. I found it warm and informational which felt right on point for the piece.

[Jahna Bobolia]

Hi Krista, Thank you for your feedback!

[Jahna Bobolia]

: ) Thank you for the feedback!

[Jahna Bobolia]

Hi! I am uploading one track with 2 different takes. My goal is to make both conversational, but with each take my “who” a different person. Questions: How is my pace? Do they both sound conversational? Do the two different tracks sounds as though I am speaking to different people. Thank You!

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