[jadethevo]

Hi there,

I could only get the Cosmos recording to play. This was very clear and well-paced.

[jadethevo]

Loved Six Flags! You did a great job acting, and making distinctions between the different “no”s. I think for Ancient Mysteries, you needed just a little bit more of a deeper inhale before you started, it sounded like you were losing your breath a bit with each word. Still pretty good, though.

[jadethevo]

This was a very clean read and it does sound conversational. I would love to hear it paced just slightly faster, and I encourage you to lean more into the conversation.

[jadethevo]

I really enjoyed listening to these.

I think, even in your attempts to make them informal, these are all very clear. I think the Geico one was very well done in particular.

On your DJ read for KATT, I think you need a cleaner break between each phrase, or maybe to take a deeper breath before you start. I can imagine that was a bit challenging considering how you’re changing your voice.

[jadethevo]

(Trying this again, my files didn’t upload properly and I can’t edit my post)

Hello, fellow VO folks!

I’m looking for feedback on these reads, nothing technical though.

Take 1 & 2 I tried to vary the intonation and pacing, Take 3 was an attempt to sound more conversational. Take 4 was me winging it, and trying to match my voice to what I imagined the visuals might convey.

Thanks in advance for the constructive feedback!

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[jadethevo]

Hello, fellow VO folks!

I’m looking for feedback on these reads, nothing technical though.

Take 1 & 2 I tried to vary the intonation and pacing, Take 3 was an attempt to sound more conversational. Take 4 was me winging it, and trying to match my voice to what I imagined the visuals might convey.

Thanks in advance for the constructive feedback!

[jadethevo]

Hi Thomas,

The Ready Player One recording feels a bit more natural to me. For Wise Man and Hope, I think it would beneficial for you to enunciate just a little bit more, and think of a friend as you speak.

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