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ParticipantA new set for today for feedback. My last set I was pushing the envelope with high energy reads and these are lower key. With the exception of the first plosive in Barkbox which I unfortunately heard when I uploaded it. Thanks in advance for listening and input!
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ParticipantWaninick, these are AMAZING. Your studio sounds top notch! It’s tough to give any feedback as since it’s SO good, I was really trying to listen super close for anything that could be helpful. Turning 100 was so sweet, I got nothing on that one. And loved how you fully played with Cactus Pepper Sauce! I would say to pull back on the accent just a bit so the words don’t get lost but, so fun! And I was totally sold on Flight 89B as well. Your voice is just perfect for that. I would say just to be careful the multisyllable words don’t get too muddy ie” approximately, identification, and the 2nd passenger I think it was? But that’s truly having to nit pick as they were just great. I’m also in love with your cat who’s a doppelganger for my sweet boy who left me this year. My heart just exploded.
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ParticipantVery natural read and tone. I felt you could slow it down a bit and just be clearer as some words got lost.
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ParticipantGood job on this. I liked the tone and it was nice and smooth throughout
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ParticipantNice tone and inflection! Some of the words got a little lost when speeding up, so being more mindful of diction. And the energy dropped a bit the last two sentences but otherwise very natural!
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ParticipantA few more today for feedback. From other comments I saw, realize that I might edit these too tightly as I try to keep it within the time frame of a spot. But really appreciate anyone taking the time to listen and provide input. Thank you!
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ParticipantYour ear analysis was pretty spot on here and overall appropriate! The studio quality sounded crisp and clear to me.
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ParticipantI’m no expert but listening with headphones, quality sounds good! Felt the lightheartedness and power – could maybe give the word “powerful” even more weight at the end to drive it home (no pun intended :D)
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ParticipantGreat reads! Enunciation would be one thing to pay more attention to. But very natural!
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ParticipantGreat reads! Your pacing, flow and pitch is all great. Heard a little loss of energy and couple of words in the Sandals spot (“luxury resorts”). Finding more of a connection to the material overall might help to punch it.
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