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Hi Tates. I like how you chose a tone with each one and the first 2 were relatively easy to follow but be mindful of keeping the pace and not speeding up too much.
The meditation was clearer throughout – rushing just a bit at the end. Felt you could have been more relaxed with it if the listener is to do the same. Really liked your energy in the Doc on Jazz but the pacing got too fast as you rushed words in the beginning and towards the end of sentences that got lost.And last one before a session on attitude focus. Realize the sound got a bit muffled in the second one, construction all of a sudden was happening and bummed that I couldn’t rehearse for a bit longer.
Thank you so much Billmull. While I was focusing more specifically on attitude in these reads, I welcome the additional feedback. I agree with your assessments considering the piece but left it for the exercise. Appreciate you taking the time to listen!
Appreciate your feedback Shelly. I was thinking the same thing as far as going even bigger on the different reads so thank you!
These were great Shelly. The pacing and diction felt right-wasn’t really aware of the glottal stops and any pauses I noticed were mostly between sentences which could just be edited tighter. The tone also felt appropriate for each. Thought you did a great job!
You have a perfect voice for this. It’s clear, sincere and professional. It did feel like you were reading though as opposed to being conversational. Maybe try speaking to and choosing one specific person you could direct this to rather than an audience. Might help to make it more relaxed and natural.
These are 2 other scripts where I’m practicing alternate reads with a different attitude. Feedback appreciated.
This definitely felt conversational. Like I was in the room and you were walking us through the slides.
