[Hazaro]

I loved this read Courtney. It was clear, sweet, engaging and playful.

[Hazaro]

My apologies as I couldn’t decipher if Toddle 1 and 2 was the same text or not but all of these sounded good to me and very appropriate for your voice. i think you posted them before and could hear the improvement. Great job!

[Hazaro]

Sounded a little unsure in the second one, but then you bounced back. Felt the difference between the two and both appropriate for the spot.

[Hazaro]

Another exercise in varying my reads. Thanks for listening!

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Thanks for listening Grace. Actually wasn’t pushing at all as I had a very clear attitude, situation and person in mind for each but it’s helpful to know how it comes across. Realize the chosen attitude might not always be the most appropriate for the spot but using it as an exercise.

[Hazaro]

Your delivery was great, maybe just differentiating the voices a bit more so it’s clear when it’s a different character. There was some background noise affecting the sound quality overall though.

[Hazaro]

I thought both of these were good and appropriate ShellyMadison, great job!

[Hazaro]

Nice job on these marioh5. I don’t know if it’s where or what you’re recording with that sounds like you’re really projecting though- which wouldn’t be necessary. You’re clear and intentional with your reads and it kept me engaged.

[Hazaro]

Overall on these I would say to be mindful of your pacing and diction. It sounds like you’re rushing through the text and words get swallowed and lost.

[Hazaro]

Still practicing clear and alternate attitude choices in my commercial reads. Did 3 for this first one as the copy was short enough to push myself. Feedback appreciated.

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