[Hazaro]

Great Reads! I did notice the “to” as “tah” a couple of times, but it might have gotten by me if not mentioned. Some parts were fast but I was still able to follow what you were saying so IMO, it didn’t take away from the narration as there were beats where it felt like natural storytelling.

[Hazaro]

Sounded natural, yes! There was just a couple of words that got a little muddled towards the end (will have you feeling), but overall good read!

[Hazaro]

I think you can have even more fun with it by playing with the script as it reads (to me) like a movie trailer. (The famous “In a world..” tone comes to mind)
Even if you go full out with that in mind just to fully play, you could always reel it in from experiencing it that way and see what happens 🙂

[Hazaro]

Two more commercials for feedback. Thank you for any and all input!

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[Hazaro]

In the cruise spot the energy seemed to drop a bit at the end of the sentences loosing some words. The excedrin spot was much more clear throughout though, just dropping a bit more towards the end. Overall just keep the energy throughout the spot to drive it home.

[Hazaro]

Another commercial sample for feedback. Thanks so much!

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[Hazaro]

Great voice and diction! I would say to just pick up the pace so it sounds more natural.

[Hazaro]

Hi Everyone!

First time posting for feedback here. Thanks for any input!

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