[Hartblam]

Hi Chris,

These sound incredible. I would agree that you should hit Free, especially when you say “you get another one free!”.
I definitely enjoyed the Tesla narration. The voice was warm and clear. There were moments in it that felt slightly robotic and I think a shift in inflection could bring it back to the warmth that your voice is giving.
SUPER impressed with how confidently and clearly you pronounced each medical term.

[Hartblam]

Hello!

I am uploading 2 of my recent sample scripts I read after my first coaching session. I am working towards a narration demo. Thank you for any feedback you may have.
Scripts are below for reference.

Advance Technologies
Welcome to advance technology incorporated and to the excitement and challenges of a growing business. As a new employee, your job is important to us. Your success is an important factor in the success of this company. This software is designed to offer you accurate information about company policies and procedures, benefit packages, performance reviews, training and education opportunities.

American Express
Thank you for holding. Did you know that you can now receive your American Express statement completely online. No more paper bills! We’ll even send you an email reminder when your statement is ready for viewing. To see if you can take advantage of this free service; log on to americanexpress.com/paperless. Or ask your representative.

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