[gwenthevoice]

Brian, thank you for that feedback! I will keep this in mind and add more inflection and be sure to watch out for pauses! 🙂

[gwenthevoice]

Detoomey, thank you very much for that insightful feedback! I will keep this in mind and try to vary my pace a bit. 🙂

[gwenthevoice]

Hello All! Here is a practice script for the awesome Nordic Track! Any comments are welcome but I especially would like feedback on the following:
•Does my read sound conversational?
•How is my diction?
•Working on my pace – how is it?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
How is my audio?
Thanks in advance!

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[gwenthevoice]

Hi everyone! I am practicing for a commercial demo. Looking for feedback to this Nutro dog food ad. For starters, here are some questions I have:
Does my read sound conversational?
How is my diction?
Working on my pace – how is it?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
How is my audio?
Thank you in advance!

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[gwenthevoice]

Your voice is almost musical! 🙂 Good pace, good pitch. One minor thing… On the grammarly script the word ‘meet’ disappears… You seem to rush through that. Beyond that, I would not change a thing.

[gwenthevoice]

This is a good audio, good pace, relatively upbeat. You have just a bit of mouth noise but that can be reduced. Check out Waves plugins. Particularly, the Waves NS (noise suppression) and the Waves DeEsser.

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