[greta_j]

Super advice! Thanks suecat!

[greta_j]

Hey folks! Looking for feedback on my read (not audio). Do I exude my inner athlete? Do I make you want to buy some new Nike gear and get fit? Thanks! /Greta

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Hey folks!
Quick Motel 6 spot for my commercial homework! Do I sound like I’m reading? What does it need to jazz it up or make me sound like I am a trusted Motel 6 employee?
((( No notes needed on audio quality please, this was done on my iphone 😉 )))

Thanks a million!
G

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[greta_j]

Hi Sherry! Nice reads.
– I think you could experiment being even more smooth and silky on the Bare Minerals read.
– On Ben and Jerry’s, I think you could go more casual, with less annunciation, and vary your pitch even more 🙂 Have fun!
/Greta

[greta_j]

Hello Audra! Good clear tone!
Listen back for some melodies and up swings on “Wall Street Journal” – try to slow down and emphasize the “… I read the Wall Street Journal” evenly bc these are the “money words” and they are the most important to hear and get into listeners’ brains 🙂 One other tidbit, try to pronounce the full word “of” in “5% alcohol of course” on take two of Twsited Tea, instead of “a-course.” Keep it up!! /Greta

[greta_j]

Good pacing overall. I like your voice for this genre, especially your lower tones. Clean up annunciation on words beginning with “pr-” like “presentation.” I think you’re doing well with ups and downs in pitch and you do it at the right places like the line “… aircraft on which you are flying.” Keep up the good work! Best///Greta

[greta_j]

Thanks! That’s perfect feedback!

[greta_j]

Hi Sherry! Nice reads! I especially like your flow on Exedrin and Crayola. Overall, clear tone and committed style on all. Six Flags could be even more WOW!. In Six Flags, watch out for your regional accent coming out on “adventure” as it sounded more like “ad-vin-ture.” On Crayola, you can soften the “r”s just a touch! Keep it up! Awesome job! /Greta

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Hi folks! I’m seeking feedback on these 3 commercial reads – specifically style, tone, and believability – as well as audio quality and sound treatment of my studio. Testing out some new equipment! Should I do any minor effects like normalizing or condensing? Thanks as always for your time! /Greta

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Hi Tiana! Your pacing as a whole is great and nice to listen to. You have a very young and fresh sound. I would suggest watching the pacing of each individual word, making sure not to skip over words like “digitally.” Keep rockin’ it!

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