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Your sound isn’t too bad, I think I may have heard some reverb but overall nothing to significant. Your tone starts out good for this read but maybe because there’s not much change in inflection the script sounds a bit read. I’m not getting a good sense of your connection to it. I hear some areas where you are over enunciating, its a little distracting to the script and takes my attention away from what you are saying. Just a few things to consider with this. Keep at it!Hi
For your edits I would just be mindful of breaths. In the first read it doesn’t sound like you took any with your edit. The second read also the same so just include them for humanisation.GE Medical: You did a real nice job with this read, the pace and your diction are spot on. I like that you hit keys words with good emphasis and transitioned smoothly.
Cats: You grabbed my attention with this read and kept me engaged. There are so many different ways to approach this read, you did it well making it your own. Whisper reads are difficult with projecting accurately, you did this with ease and with changing your inflections. Keep it up!
Hi everyone,
Here are a couple reads. I would love feedback on anything that your wonderful ears can point out.I think you did good with and on here but I hear you with to if we say it fast enough it unconsciously comes out as ta. I hear it when you say “causing the water to boil over.” Try slowing down when you’re about to approach “to” I think your brain will remind you to say too instead. Keep at it!
Great job tackling this read. You sound professional and serious. There are a few things I would just be mindful of with corporate reads. Because they are consider formal reads, the pace is usually a little slower. The Beginning of your audio has a plosive when you say two thousand so you are aware. Your listing of variations are good but be mindful of pausing in between as it makes the read a little choppy. Overall very good diction and nice job!
Welcome back Tim,
Your read on this script sounds natural and approachable. I like your energy and approach to it given that you’re winging it! I would just note your diction. I hear some dropped “th” when you say health and a slur with this word as well. I think that would be somewhere to start.Welcome Back!
Your read is warm and inviting. I would add some energy to your approach along with increasing your pace. There is a lot of pauses in this read micro and unintentional which makes the read choppy.I also hear glottal stop as you approach Ethan Allen. There is also your diction to be aware of as you say test it sounds like you’ve dropped your T (Tess). The ending is abrupt which I’m not sure if you cut the script short or just the way you ended the last sentence on the note. So just being aware of these things should help for a smoother read.Yes, there’s so much to keep track of when you’re learning, we’re all there with you! Keep at it and it will start to piece together!
You have a nice soft voice thats youthful.
Risewell:
I would be careful when pronouncing client’s products as I believe Risewell is mispronounced it sounds like you’re saying rinse well. There are lots of pauses in between your read which makes it a little awkward to listen to you can remove spaces with your editing so everything is combined and sounds smoother.Type 2 Learn:
This was a very cute read, You gave this read good energy and the pace was on spot for instructional. I would just be mindful of the dead spaces in between your reads. Keep it up!
