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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #78356
    Gill
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    Back with a few scripts would appreciate any feedback!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78323
    Gill
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    Hi Jmacdotorg,
    I like your pace for this read, you have a good narrative voice. Something I noticed with your read is the way you pronounced AMICA. I believe its pronounced “Ameeka”not “ah mic a” so I would be careful with pronouncing the client’s name. There are some others words to be mindful of with your diction. Otherwise keep it up!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78322
    Gill
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    Hi Esalguera,
    You have a nice vocal approach that highlights what you say. I thought your pace and diction were good and they were both conversational. I liked that you hit Blue but wanted to hear that hit with 0%. You did great hitting everything for Trendi really making it stand out. Nice job!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78234
    Gill
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    VoicesbyJeff,
    Really nice jobs on these reads! Each sounded natural, pace complements each script and you’re clear with your diction. I liked that you changed the phrases of the last script with born instead of born itself. I caught myself being distracted with each word instead of the phrase so nice job on catching that in your variations.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78196
    Gill
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    Hi Rebekah,
    Air Jamaica:You did a nice job making me feel like I was going to Jamaica. If you didn’t mention it I would have said you sounded native. I think your pace is good for this read because anything faster with the accent would have probably made it harder to understand. Your diction was also clear. The only thing I would say about this is to make sure you continuously stay in the accent as I hear it dropped a few times.
    Motivational-Informercial: I like that you made this your own, for this read I would be mindful of your diction with research, your pace is good.
    National Gallery of Art: I liked your energy for this read and pace. I would be careful with some of the pronunciations with this read like Picasso sounded like Pocasso, nice job overall!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78193
    Gill
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    Hi some more practice scripts, any feedback would be great!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78155
    Gill
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    Lindsay,
    You have such a pleasant voice that pairs very well with each of these reads. Each read kept me engaged and your pace is great! I liked your variations for advance technology, and how medically versed you were with atrial fib, and how you changed inflections on trex. Cynerio had a few pauses in it that made me feel like I was waiting for the next thing. Overall nice job and good luck on your record session!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78088
    Gill
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    Rusty,
    Really nice job with your reads, both sound natural, pace could be alittle faster for the first if needed. Overall diction was clear on both. Good luck on your demo!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78087
    Gill
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    RGK3
    Your read sounded natural, I thought your pace was good. I do hear some popping with “cap and opener but I noticed your working on your studio so that’s more on the audio side. Other than that it sounds great!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78085
    Gill
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    Thanks for noticing that, very helpful to me and will be more cautious of it!

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