James
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As it turns out, the scratch was from my headphones, or more in particular how I had some settings in my computer. The sound was clear after all.
I’m operating from the closet as well, it just works. Currently I’m waiting for mic upgrades and a phantom power supply to add to it.
Your delivery was very good! But for the sound the volume was loud. I am also just guessing, but did you use a noise remover by chance? The noise floor was low as it should be, but I did hear some “scratch” in the audio on my end; perhaps someone can give a listen and make sure it’s not my headphones. I’d be interested to know more about the home studio setup you have if that is ok.
The biology track (the second posted, didn’t listen to the first) was Ok! Perhaps bring the pace up some, and engage the listener. I was a good track, but I didn’t get the connection. Otherwise the read was good! The airline track had a very good pace and also well read. I have a feeling you will go far in voice over!
The Toyota one is perfect! Good pace and feel. The second was good, but didn’t have the feel. You could try it with just a little less emphasis on some of the parts. It was still a great take!
If these were playing on the radio, I would never know you were starting out. Very good delivery and clear sound. Only constructive criticism I can provide? Possibly try the Purina commercial with a happier emotion for a friendlier feel and see what that sounds like. If it helps, Actually laugh before starting to give yourself that cheerful sound and see what that does.
This version is good though!Thank you! Yes it was for a warm up, so I was pushing to read it faster then a normal script simply because it was a tongue twister lol I now hear the missing T.
Thank you for the kind words! I’m very critical of my work, and I do mean with everything. But your input does mean a lot!
