Tina
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thanks so much for the helpful feedback! I haven’t done any sound correcting on these so I appreciate those notes as well.
You have a great quality to your voice and great diction and enunciation. That being said, I think all the elements are there but it’s coming off a little forced. I think Atkins is the closest to being conversational and less presentational. Make it more of a one-on-one conversation with someone. You have a really amazing voice so a little tweak and you’ll be in the zone for sure!
Two scripts I’ve been playing with!
Thanks for any feedback!
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Practicing scripts from the script library. Thanks for any feedback!
Tina
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Truebill- I think it would be helpful to think of a lead in line. What happened right before? Who are you talking to and why are you telling them this information? A recommendation would be to practice this one as if you are having a conversation with someone and every line is an answer to a question they are asking you. I did this on some reads and it helps it come out more natural sounding.
Pretty Litter- This one sounds like a reading. I think just taking the moment before and establishing who you are telling this to will make the world of difference.
Wix- This read was the most natural and free flowing. Really nice pacing and you sounded confident in the material.
Just a few tweaks to your reads and you’ll get there! Hope this helps!
Hey there!
I loved your energy on the first read. Good pacing and nice interpretation of the script.
I love the hint of the laugh I hear on the word roses in the sentence “hear the roses”. Very genuine, grounded read and I can hear the smile in your voice.
Really nice pacing on this read. The music ties in very well too. Can’t really think of any critique other than maybe infusing your opinion into when you say “man bun”. Like how you do feel about it? Is it confusing, interesting, scary?
nice read!
Hey guys! Three reads I tried. Thanks for any feedback!
Tina
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That was great! Good job for your first time. You definitely got the relaxing vibe down and your natural delivery has nice pacing to it. The only thing I noticed was the words “you will” in the sentence “during this breathing medication, you will focus on your breath” sound rushed together so I’d just enunciate that clearer.
