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Hi Sara, I enjoyed both reads, I’ll share with you my notes for each read after listening a couple of times.
Creativity – great tone, good pacing, emphasized key words well.
Starbucks – great tone, good pacing, emphasized key words nicely, liked in particular, “”world’s finest fresh-roasted whole bean coffees.”
Great job, you’re going to do well with your demo. Thumbs up.
Hello everybody, below are three Narration reads. Please feel free to provide feedback on performance and recording quality for any or all of the reads. Thank you.
NetJets 24 Hour Worldwide Medical Assistance
At NetJets, our care for our Owners means not only flying them halfway around the world in the safest way possible, but also getting them the help they need should a medical emergency arise far from home. That’s why we collaborated with Mayo clinic to develop Mayo Clinic Executive Travel Response. As an owner, you’ll receive a dedicated phone number to reach Mayo Clinic medical professionals 24 hours a day, for any medical reason. Whether you need critical care in Eastern Europe and don’t know where to turn, or just want medical advice from a trusted source closer to home, someone is always there for you.
Cats
They are hunters, with muscles taut, and eyes fixed on their intended prey. They are gentle, with fluid movement and a sensitive touch. They are regal, with a lineage that goes back to worshiped ancestors during the time of the Pharaohs. They are introspective, aloof, unpredictable, affectionate, comical and mischievous. They are cats.
Bob Ross Biography
Bob Ross. Just his name brings a calm. The soft-spoken painter who didn’t make mistakes, only “happy accidents,” painted on PBS stations in the 1980s and 1990s. His untimely death in 1995 at the age of 52 occurred just when he was exploding on the pop culture scene. He even appeared in a hip MTV spot back when MTV was hip. “MTV, the land of happy little trees.” There’s a lot people don’t know about Bob Ross, so get ready for some surprises about the guy with the sweet pipes and sweeter ‘fro.
Hi Adrrianna, I really liked your read. Your tone and pace were great. Also the recording quality sounded solid. The only critique I have is the giggle in the third sentence. The listener might be somebody who is new to meditation, and may be thrown off by a giggle. But overall good job.
Hi Bil-Bo, this read is excellent and sounds professional. The tone, tempo, and recording quality are all top notch. Great job.
Hi CYeschenko, good job with this performance. The tone and pace are very good. Also you differentiate nicely between questions. The only critique I have is with the fourth question. At the end it sounds like you are slightly winded. I would recommend stepping away from the mic, taking two deep breathes, and then going back to the mic to deliver the line. But overall good job.
Hi Mary, I like both performances. Your tone, tempo, and pacing are very good. Also the recording quality sounds good. The only critique I have, is I hear pauses in two places, that perhaps shouldn’t be there, betweeen room and is and also between faces and whose. But overall good job.
Hi Jeff, wow this read was fantastic. The tone, tempo, pitch, and volume were all on point. The recording quality was very good. The only negative I noticed, as monibr16 pointed out, some of the endings of words were dropped. But overall this was a great read, and sounded very professional. Great job.
Hi, your voice sounds great, and matches well with the copy. You differentiated the words in the series nicely, and the tone of the read was great. My only suggestion would be to maybe slow down the tempo just a little bit. But overall you did a good job.
Hello everybody, I’m practicing some more commercial scripts, as I have my demo coming up this week. Please provide feedback on performance and recording quality. Thanks.
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