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Hi Rogue1, thank you for yourcomments, I really appreciate all of them.They are spot on!

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Hi everyone. I am working on another commercial read and would welcome your comments.
Thank you!

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Hey everyone, I am working on a couple of scripts I am considering for a commercial demo. The Colorado read is two takes. The second script is for Zquill. I welcome any feedback.
Ed

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Hi Mary, I like the pacing on your read and your change in tone on ” Excedrin” was good! It sounds a bit as if you are reading this. Imagine you are speaking to a friend. It may help you sound more connected. I enjoyed it!
Ed

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Mary, thank you for your comments on this read.

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Super Luke, thanks for your comments. Can you be any more specific about the background noise?

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Tim, thank you for your comments. yes, pausing is an ongoing challenge for me.
Ed

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Mary, thank you for commenting on the read. I want to also thank you for comments you made on a read I did a couple of weeks ago,but did not acknowledge them. Please accept my apologies!
Ed

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SuperLuke, thank you for your comments. I appreciate them.

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RYoung, thanks for your comments on the read. Yes, I think your point about more energy toward the end id right on!

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