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Tina, thank you for your clear, specific comments. I really appreciate them! Your comments on having a strong opinion on the opening of the VRBO spot is a good one. Thanks also for the point about bringing more of an uplifting feel to the second read.
Much appreciated!
EdTom, once again thanks for your very specific comments. Thanks for the heads up on pronouncing VRBO! Your point on envisioning the scene is one I am continuing to work on. Good to hear the audio quality is good.
Thanks again.
EdHi everyone, I am working on two more reads for a commercial demo. I would appreciate your comments on any of it. Also how is the sound quality? Thank you in advance!
EdJay, all three of these are really good! Your tone on each is right on! so is your pacing. My only note would be on the second read your pronunciation on “vatamins” could be clearer.
Hey Tom, thank you for your very specific comments on my reads. Yes, “the call to action” is a technique that I am continuing to work on. Yes, the need to be very specific is a central part of my training as I am preparing to record a commercial demo. On #2 – yes I hear that pause. Thanks again for your comments. They are very helpful.
EdHi everyone, I am working on two more commercial reads and would welcome your feedback. Thank you, Ed
Dawn, thank you for your comments. wow! it really helps to get the feedback from others. It seems very challengidng at times to hear for myself what I am “voicing” really sounds like. Yes, I am still working on pausing at the wrong moment.
Katelyn, I like your tone, energy and the enthusiasm you bring to this read. There is not much I would do differently. Youre articulation is also really good. Great Job!
