[Ems412]

Hello,

I love the Grenada one, your accent sounds an extra touch!

[Ems412]

Hello,

I would like to get some feedback on my three narration reads below for my coaching class homework. THank you in advance.

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[Ems412]

Hello,

I like the pace and the annunciation, but because this is Disney I would say maybe add some more excitement or maybe pitch upwards especially the first sentence.”The magic is calling you, to stay at Disney resort hotel! “

[Ems412]

Hello,

I love your voice! I do hear a southern accent?? I think that’s is what Garprocks was maybe getting at when talking about the word “American”, but I think they all sound great. There was a little mouth noise in the sales training read around the 5-6 second mark.

[Ems412]

Hello everyone,

I recorded three narration reads below. I am looking to get some peer feedback on them.

The airline ones are pretty self explanatory but the advance technologies one is an explainer video aimed at on boarding employees.

I am looking for technical feedback tone and pitch etc. Your feedback is appreciated. Thank you.

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