[Ems412]

Hello,

I really liked the cirque de soleil one. For the Acura one, I didn’t think the list was flat. I could hear you inflecting but it wasn’t very noticeable.

[Ems412]

Hello Wes,

I agree with Rusty on the Italy read, to me it doesn’t sound like you’re connected with the copy therefore it didn’t come off as conversational. Overall I like the clearness of your voice, pacing, and pitch. I really like the Aetna read.

[Ems412]

Hello,

I really liked the Church’s Chicken read. It felt like a voice-over that could be a radio commercial. I think the pace is good and your voice is clear but it seems to lack excitement. I do like the addition of the last line as well. And maybe a little more emphasis on TWO sides.

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[Ems412]

Thank you Gill.

[Ems412]

THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK. IT HELPS ALOT.

[Ems412]

Hello,

Below I have three scripts that are similar to the copy I want to use for my demo. I am looking for feedback regarding pacing( too fast, too slow?) and overall critiques. Thank you.

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[Ems412]

Hello,

I liked both but for the Mrs. Dash spot the part “instead of reaching…reach” is a bit fast.

[Ems412]

Hello Sarania,

I loved the Lego spot. I really liked the differentiation between the child’s voice and the parent’s. For GErber I did like the subtle “punch” on the word natural as well.

[Ems412]

Thank you! My instructor and I agreed you have a great ear!

[Ems412]

Hello,

First I love your voice, commercial work fits you perfectly. I only have one critique; the Coast to Coast read you sped up the pace on “A todas partes de los Estados Unidos” then went back to the normal pacing after. I don’t know if that was intentional or not.

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