[ekairush04]

Hi Everyone,
I’m submitting my two scripts for practice. Let me know what you think. I need all the help I can get.
Thanks,
Elena R.

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[ekairush04]

Hi Everyone,
My name is Elena and I’m new to this. I’ve recorded a couple of samples, so any feedback would be very much appreciated.

Thank you

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[ekairush04]

Hi Everyone,
These are my two practice scripts. Would love any feedback on them. Thank you in advance. >ER

In This House
In this house
There is no mess
No gossiping, nothing negative, and definitely no stress
Never mind what happened in the past
Putting focus there only makes it last
In this house we ONLY dream
It’s why we make the perfect team
Only speak of all the good to come
Move to the beat of Our own drums
In this house it’s just like me
We practice the dreams we desire to be
Now in this house the things you see
Are all the dreams that were in ME.

Cosmos

Welcome to the planet earth. A place of blue nitrogen skies, oceans of liquid water, cool forests, soft meadows; A world positively rippling with life. From the cosmic perspective, it is, for the moment, unique. The only world on which we know with certainty that the matter of the cosmos has become alive, and aware. There must be many such worlds scattered through space, but our search for them begins here, with the accumulated wisdom of the men and women of our species, acquired at great cost, over a million years.

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