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Both great reads! In the corona one some air got into your mic, that can be easily edited. Love the cannabis read, I do feel like your pace slowed at the end though.
Great read Alex! I thought I was actually watching a toothpaste commercial while listening. Please continue the great work.
Good evening everyone,
Below I have 3 reads. My mic was acting up so I had to use the good ol’ laptop mic. Any and all feedback would be greatly beneficial. Thank you in advance.
All great reads.
The Old Navy and Sesame Place reads were lively. I was anticipating a melody behind your words. I actually envisioned watching a commercial while listening.The Snapple read was good also but I was expecting a little more liveliness in your tone.
Continue the great work!
Hi Tracey,
Both reads were great. In the first read it seems you sped up a little bit toward the end and in the second read the first time you said “hazards” needed a little more pronunciation. Besides that it was awesome. Keep up the great work.
Had some issues cleaning up the audio. Any and all feedback is welcomed. Scripts are listed below:
Cosmos
Welcome to the planet earth. A place of blue nitrogen skies, oceans of liquid water, cool forests, soft meadows; A world positively rippling with life. From the cosmic perspective, it is, for the moment, unique. The only world on which we know with certainty that the matter of the cosmos has become alive, and aware. There must be many such worlds scattered through space, but our search for them begins here, with the accumulated wisdom of the men and women of our species, acquired at great cost, over a million years.Pokémon: The First Movie – Mewtwo
A human sacrificed himself to save the Pokémon. I pitted them against each other, but not until they set aside their differences did I see the true power they all share deep inside. I see now that the circumstances of one’s birth are irrelevant. It is what you do with the gift of life that determines who you are.California
It’s easy to understand why the United States went to war to get California. A land full of wonders, where one man’s chance discovery triggered a mad rush for gold. And where a new generation of marijuana growers is testing the limits of the law. Full of ancient forests and volcanic forms and a valley that’s also the hottest place on earth.
Enjoy spectacular views along the Pacific Coast Highway or soar over beaches and wine country. Explore Big Sur redwoods and cross the Golden Gate Bridge into the heart and soul of this magnificent state. It’s a region full of character, from movie stars to silicon valley giants to amazing natural wonders. Join us as we visit the Golden State of California.Hi Bruce,
I listened to your SamCookBio file. It sounded awesome my only critique would be on your sentences the ended with a “s”. Be careful to not drag the “s” too much at then end of your sentence. Otherwise it was great.
