[Earthbul]

Is this a piece from a documentary script ? If so I feel the pace could be a bit quicker and slightly less maudlin. I’d have to hear a little more to get a better idea.

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No activity on this forum all week. Ya’ll producing or what ?

[Earthbul]

Any and all feedback appreciated.
Btw, is the music too overpowering ?

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Practice read. Any and all critiques and comments welcomed and appreciated.

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Once again recorded in the car lol any and all comments or critiques are welcomed and appreciated.

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I have to agree with the others. A bit choppyand breathy. Could benefit with a quicker pace. Love the accent brother.

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I really both of these reads. You kept me engaged with a quick pace and great enunciation. Nice spacing in the edits. Really clean sound as well.

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My submission for this weeks contest “Committee for Cleaner Elections”
Any thoughts ?

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You’re voice and recording quality are top notch. Vinegar was just fine on Promist. While I really enjoyed both reads I felt that if the pace was a just a little quicker on the JC Penny spot it would make it a billion times better. Keep up the awesome work.

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Another recording from the backseat. Getting a at875r shotgun for Christmas. Looking forward to trying it out. Anyone else use this particular mic ?

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