[donna77]

Hi Taylor,
Really nice reads! I think for the Chime spot you could play with differentiating the beginning, middle and end of the spot a bit more to give the important pieces their own feeling (I hope that makes sense!).

I really liked the variety in your Nickelodeon Hotels spot and the warmth/excitement in your voice. I think you could slow down the tiniest bit (I lost the end of the word accommodation for example) and I’d give a little beat before the final line so it has more punch.
Hope that helps! 🙂
Donna

[donna77]

Hi everyone,
I’m interested in any feedback on the attached – I am particularly interested in hearing if the alternate takes have enough variety/point of view and if the reads are conversational. I’m open to any other feedback, including technical, as well. Here are the specs for the spot:

“For this spot, you’ll be playing a young mother looking for life insurance. We’re striving for levity and, more importantly, authenticity. I encourage you to find nuance in your performance and work with a finer brush than you may be used to. Keep in mind as well that this spot falls somewhere between a comedy and drama. It’s serious, but not heavy; it’s sweet and lighthearted, but not necessarily funny.”

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