Don Sack
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Notetaker!
Very soothing voice! What do I know, but, the IR spot; don’t go up in pitch at the end of the statements? Sounds a bit strange like a Valley Girl; it also gave me the feeling that you were talking down to the audience.
The EV spot was also very good vocally; perhaps slow the read down and enunciate?
Rock On!Hey!
I think this is very good! My suggestion; make it flow by cutting the pauses? The pauses make it sound as if you’re reading a list, makes the listener squirm a bit, LOL!
Rock On!Hey Dillon;
Slow down and enunciate. Is that your “normal” speaking voice? Otherwise don’t push the vocals, it sounds contrived to me. Great enthusiasm! Be clear and convincing.
Rock On!Hey Chris!
Yup, I bet Art is going to emphasize that you slow down. I have that problem as well and one really needs to be mindful of that; for some reason, getting in front of a mike flips on the “faster” switch. Perhaps too, differentiate lists of items? A pop filter may also be a good addition.
Great voice guy!
Rock On!Bev;
Yea! Great voice! Tim has good points and speaks to my work as well; 1) Don’t over do it but sound more excited about this new technology you are selling. 2) Differentiate lists of items with your tone. 3) Be smooth, watch the pauses even with full stops and semi colons.
I find that it really helps to slow the read down and then listen to it several times, eyes closed not looking at the waves, over several listening’s you start to catch a pattern that you know will work; don’t rush practice!Thanks Erik! You are correct, I need to slow it down; I get that from my coach all the time! The Russian’s are in the Holland Tunnel, get this done! LOL!
Ann-Marie!
Wonderful voice! Perhaps if you added a bit more enthusiasm to the reads and used tone/pitch to enhance the differentiations when reading “lists”.
