Don Sack
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Hey Chris!
I think these are very good! Hmmm.. “FREE”? Emphasize free; not overboard but emphasize the tire is…..FREE, the alignment is….FREE.
I thought you “instructional” voice was excellent; watch the popping sounds but that comes as you get your studio squared away: Pop Filter, mic distance.
Rock On!Hey Logan!
Congratulations on taking the plunge into VO!
The Comlongon spot, a couple of thoughts; check up on the accepted pronunciation of that name? It sounds a bit like you “ate” the word. Perhaps slow down a bit and be smoother, make the script flow more? Reading lists of things, differentiate each item via inflection, consider what words to emphasize; watch the popping of p’s and b’s and such. I thought the Ripple spot was good and you ended it well!
Rock On!Tylwoo; Very entertaining!! Are you working on “breakthrough”? Otherwise some of the bed music is a tad distracting. #2, I could not understand most of what you said; the prospector voice was great! Fegettaboutit!
Rock On!Nettipo!
With your voice…you’re hired! Listen, a pause and different inflection before “drizzle”; as well, the recording cut off the finish.Greetings!
Here are two spots for you to listen to and critique please. On a roll here after a bit of a layoff.Nettipo1;
Thanks so much for very constructive feedback! You are very right in that I have to be constantly mindful of slowing things down.Jose!
Nice voice guy! Kind of choppy maybe? Smoother and no pauses? Look into setting up your recording, kind of hollow sounding and extraneous noise.
Rock On!Cb!
Nice stuff! The Premier League spot: ya, slow it down; delineate the items you’re listing by inflections, they are all the same tone now….boring. Premier League is just that and THE hottest football (soccer) league on the planet with literally Billions of rabid fans, so look into that and pump up the passion!
Rock On!Tamanitw1;
Very very nice! A real smooth, inviting voice that grabs attention! I’m sure that Johnny H. will be coaching your talent for huge success!
Rock On!
