Marco;
Hey, I have the sense you’re trying to go with voices you have heard in commercials, or this just may be you?
Oh yea, k**l those pauses for sure, make it flow and use some deflection up and down to delineate lists of things.
Learning to edit breath sounds out as well as the pauses, with your recording software?
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Hey Stas! Nice voice! My impression? Look into getting your recording space set up. The Movie Gallery spot sounds like you’re talking to someone in a pub, BUT that’s good because you sound natural in the presentation! Perhaps slow down a bit on both and really enunciate words; watch the S’s and the P’s (pop filter).
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Hey Max!
Nice work! Cheerful voice! I want to listen!
The Carnation spot; it sounds like kids are packed with protein, not the drink, figure out how to delineate that? I think the line should start with Carnation myself..
Perhaps slow down a bit (if there is no slate) with all three? Go up at the end when you say JC Penny? I don’t know, sometimes, apparently, that’s not the way to go but I like it!
Hey Sue!
Great pipes! Very Soothing! Thinking…..pop filter? back off the mic? I don’t know, I just here a lot of “mouth noises” if you know what I mean; I have a same issue in that if one slows down a bit the clarity of enunciation is better?
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Hey Colton!
I like these! Other than the oops pronunciations at the end of Geico, I do really like them. At first I thought you could sound a bit more excited but then I thought that this is your style and it works for me!
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