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HiShmuel. Great reads! You have a great voice for Avocado for sure! You just lost the last word “eat” a little. And nice work on the technical on Chromium; I hear a little mouth noise….happens to me too! Otherwise, good work! 🙂

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ok! Thanks so much!!

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Hello All. A couple of Narration homework reads. Any feedback is appreciated!

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Hi bnielsen15. I like your voice for these. My take is slow down a bit on Harvey, and it seems both could use a little “punch” like…”your fingertips”, “Packed” with protein. A little more emotion. Great job on your first upload!

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Hi Yvette. Yours is such a sweet, delicate voice. I have to turn up my headphones to hear you; is that just my set up?? I’ll say maybe check the length of pause between day, plus in People. And, maybe give Tazo (i like take 2) a bit more umph/yum. nice work!

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Hi John. Agreed, smooth, easy to listen to reads! I found myself halted a few times, maybe at “simply, the best” in Royal Oak, and in Intuition at “smooths and soothes”. Quite pleasant though,nice work!

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Thanks so much. Appreciate the feedback and boost! 🙂

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Hi. I like how your voice makes the message seem simple and friendly. I wonder if the last line needs a little more punch?

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Hi JustJohn. Your input is much appreciated! Yesssss, i will pay attention to s’s, and over pronouncing consonants. And do find “Top Puppy Players” tricky to treat casually. I will keep working on them!

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Hello All. Posting 2 new narration reads. Looking forward to any and all input, thank you!

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