[DillonP]

You have a good way of using a different voice. But feels like your not leaving enough space between sentences.

[DillonP]

Hello everyone, I have both a Commercial and Narration piece. please feel free to provide any feedback, I would really apricate some inside, thank you.

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[DillonP]

The diction was good, and enunciation good, and pacing was fine. But there seems to be a little to much space in between the sentences at the end of them and some clicking and they both sound the same. Overall they were pretty good.

[DillonP]

Here are three new samples I just got done. I would really appreciate some impute and if there is to much clicking. And if there is how do I deal with it properly?

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[DillonP]

Thanks for the input I’ll make sure to remember that and improve more.

[DillonP]

Here is some recordings this week, please give me your thoughts.

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[DillonP]

Here are some voice commercials I’ve just uploaded for the week. I welcome any feedback that is given than can help me go foward.

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[DillonP]

Hello everyone, just posting a take for practice and would appreciate some feedback. Now that we are entering the new year, I plan to put more into recording as much as possible.

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[DillonP]

It sounded pretty good. by smiling more you can make it even better, so keep up the good work.

[DillonP]

Seems pretty good so far, but could use more enthusiasm and slow down a little in your narration. other than that I think it was a fine promo that you did. Just make sure to keep up the good work.

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