DillonP
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Hello everyone I have just gotten done with both a commercial and narration piece. Please leave any feedback that can help me with my diction and enunciation, Thank you.
It sounded clear the last time, and on the fourth one you had your volume under control. But there where certain words that you were over enunciating such as “long”. other then that I think it was a good take just need to work on your enunciations and it can be good. Just keep up the good work.
Hello everyone it has been sometime since I had posted anything for feedback on how I am doing regarding my training and improving as a voice actor. I had just submitted new recordings. the first is an commercial witch I had done in the past, and posted on the forum, but is new and improved, and also an narration piece. Please give your feedback and let me know if I am starting to get a bit rusty in my speech, spelling and enunciation skills are starting to dwindle a bit. I will continue to keep on improving and posting new Narration and Commercial too work toward my goal as a voice actor and wish the best for everyone else as well.
I just finished four reads two commercial and two narration. This is about getting annunciation, Emphasis, speech and other things that will be important. Please let give me feedback I would really appreciate it. Thank You.
Commercials: A-1 Stanek Sauce and Arby’s
Narration: AEC Foundation and USO- Make a diffrence.Here are new pieces I was working on. An old commercial 4kids and a narration, A Haunting Title. I would apricate all of the feedback that is given. I just hope that I am not to fast or slow with their deliveries. And Hope that my enunciations aren’t too over the top or being too slurred.
I have two new recordings I got done. A commercial Discovery Kids and Narration Breast Cancer Research. I would apricate some feedback to help me be ready for when my Demos being developed, thank you.
Good it still sounds good, although I believe that hear a little studder in the middle, and should keep your words consistent and put more emotion into your read. other than that I think you did a pretty good job. Keep at it.
You have a really great voice, and the way that you did the Macys take, sounded colorful and singing a bit. As for the Dove one I think it was a technical error with that one on, during which had some glitches. I think it was because of the recording issue and not you, because I think you were perfect in every way with Macys and I am sure it’s the same thing with dove if that error where fixed. Just keep up the good work.
