DillonP

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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #84240
    DillonP
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    Hello, I’ve completed two reads one Narration which is a positive one. While the commercial is dark and mysterious. Please give me feedback, so I learn to keep improving myself, Thank you.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #83325
    DillonP
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    I have gotten two new reads done, an new narration and an old commercial that I did a long time ago. Please give me some feedback and let me know if there’s anything I can do to improve my reads.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #82060
    DillonP
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    Hello everyone I have just gotten done with both a commercial and narration piece. Please leave any feedback that can help me with my diction and enunciation, Thank you.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81598
    DillonP
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    It sounded clear the last time, and on the fourth one you had your volume under control. But there where certain words that you were over enunciating such as “long”. other then that I think it was a good take just need to work on your enunciations and it can be good. Just keep up the good work.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81430
    DillonP
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    Hello everyone it has been sometime since I had posted anything for feedback on how I am doing regarding my training and improving as a voice actor. I had just submitted new recordings. the first is an commercial witch I had done in the past, and posted on the forum, but is new and improved, and also an narration piece. Please give your feedback and let me know if I am starting to get a bit rusty in my speech, spelling and enunciation skills are starting to dwindle a bit. I will continue to keep on improving and posting new Narration and Commercial too work toward my goal as a voice actor and wish the best for everyone else as well.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79183
    DillonP
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    I just finished four reads two commercial and two narration. This is about getting annunciation, Emphasis, speech and other things that will be important. Please let give me feedback I would really appreciate it. Thank You.

    Commercials: A-1 Stanek Sauce and Arby’s
    Narration: AEC Foundation and USO- Make a diffrence.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78276
    DillonP
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    Two new takes of both Narration and Commercial. Please leave feedback to see how well I did.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77743
    DillonP
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    Here are new pieces I was working on. An old commercial 4kids and a narration, A Haunting Title. I would apricate all of the feedback that is given. I just hope that I am not to fast or slow with their deliveries. And Hope that my enunciations aren’t too over the top or being too slurred.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77562
    DillonP
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    I have two new recordings I got done. A commercial Discovery Kids and Narration Breast Cancer Research. I would apricate some feedback to help me be ready for when my Demos being developed, thank you.

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77160
    DillonP
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    Good it still sounds good, although I believe that hear a little studder in the middle, and should keep your words consistent and put more emotion into your read. other than that I think you did a pretty good job. Keep at it.

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