[dguertin]

I also think your voice sounds great in these reads. I especially like the tone in the Kerry Gold ad; the light gravel fits nicely. In the Home Depot ad, my only note would be to try to adjust the pace in the lists. The line that begins “you can find it” sounds a bit stilted, almost questioning, to begin but then evens out. Overall a very good job to my beginner ear!

[dguertin]

I agree with Hazaro, your voice has a wonderful natural resonance. I thought the natural jokey/amused tone in the Harvey2 clip fit really well and came across as natural and endearing. The Financial Engines reading was a good tonal shift for a more serious script. I thought the message of experience you can trust came through naturally due to your voice’s timbre. One note is that you may want to try to push through a little more naturally as you go into “using proprietary advice…,” but I understand that is where you took a breath. Otherwise, I thought the two takes were very good.

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