[dejapowell]

Hi Debbie, I am currently working on being more converational as well. One thing that my coach is helping me with is speed. I think that your pace is a little quick, slowing down a bit may help a bit.

Good luck!

[dejapowell]

In my opinion both recordings were very conversational, and your diction was very good. The only suggestion I would make is to work on your speed just a bit. Overall, very good!

[dejapowell]

Hello Everyone,

Happy New Year! This is my first time participating in the forum, and I am really excited to get started. I have uploaded two recordings, and would love some feedback. I recorded them on my phone, so please keep the feedback centered around the content and not the quality 🙂

I am currently working on my speed and diction, here are a couple of questions I would appreciate you answering:

-How is my pace?
-Can you understand me clearly?
-How is my diction?
-Does my read sound conversational?

Thank you so much for your time! I look forward to your feedback.

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