[Dante M.]

thank you everyone!

[Dante M.]

I love your voice. 1 and 2 are good and in my opinion marketable, but the third one seems to have a script that demands a little more enthusiasm.

[Dante M.]

Hi everyone, I have three scripts I’d like to share for criticism, and I’d also like to hear thoughts on my audio quality. Cheers!

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[Dante M.]

Good read with nice pacing, but more importantly, there’s some fizz going on every time you speak and unfortunately it’s relatively noticeable. Hopefully you can fix that.

[Dante M.]

Thank you everyone for the valuable feedback. I was in fact playing around with my mic placement and background noise reduction, so Sarah’s tidbit on my volume was VERY useful.

[Dante M.]

I did in fact edit it because I took massive breaths in between those words that sounded awful.

[Dante M.]

Hello everyone! I’m back once again asking for criticism on these three scripts. Cheers!

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[Dante M.]

I’m not sure why I’m unable to edit my post, but I just wanted to say that my audio files were louder, but for some reason they uploaded rather quietly.

[Dante M.]

Wonderful voice for the read, nice and tough but highlights the good stuff.

[Dante M.]

You have a wonderful voice for this type of script. I would just slow it down slightly and obey the ellipses more , as that would further increase the synergy you have with the read. You highlighted the words appropriately.

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