[colleen]

R-
This is a well-written script…and I thought you sounded clear & professional and have a nice rich vocal tone. I thought the read was a bit fast and heard upward inflections on the word “curiosity” both times in line three and the word “true” at the end of line six, as well as elongations of other words that made it seem a bit choppy and not super-confident sounding. Looking forward to hearing your final version of this!
~colleen

[colleen]

Thanks so much for this info, touzet! I will try it with my next read.

[colleen]

Beautiful rich voice & tone…but I also had trouble understanding your pronunciation of “world’s”.

[colleen]

Mary-
Thanks so much for your feedback! This is definitely a big learning curve…especially when you also need pretty savvy computer skills (which I definitely do NOT have!!) Looking forward to more listening & learning.

[colleen]

Burdahgirl~your first go at a commercial is fantastic!! Loved the different kids’ voices & thought your timing was perfect!

[colleen]

Great read, Gabe! I loved your timing, enthusiasm and pitch…

[colleen]

IF anyone has suggestions on how to download voice memos from a MacBook so that it shows up as an “attachment”, please let me know! 🙂

[colleen]

Hi there! Here’s the first of my narration scripts for session #1 homework. Absolutely brand new to voiceover, recorded on Mac computer in my freezing-cold basement(no husband, dog or extraneous noise there…) & looking forward to any tips, feedback, suggestions, etc. Big thanks! ~colleen

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[colleen]

Hi, Burdahgirl-
I really liked this read: upbeat, nice pacing & confident…nice job!

[colleen]

TREMENDOUS read and background music, Touzet~great pacing, tone…I could almost TASTE the whiskey!

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