[CMcHugh]

Hi RCampos, first off I wanted to thank you for the feedback you provided, I really appreciate it. For your read I thought you sounded great, it had a good energy throughout, the only thing I would say is for the transition between “He’s back” and “Each year” is to add a slightly longer pause as you switch between the flows of the read.

[CMcHugh]

Hello, posting two recordings for homework, and comments and feedback would be much appreciated.

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[CMcHugh]

Hi Unity, I thought your read had good flow throughout, but it felt like needed a little more energy to it. Otherwise, it was pretty good.

[CMcHugh]

Hi everyone, posting two reads for homework, any feedback would be much appreciated 😊

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