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Hi! Great recording. Your voice and pace was terrific. I think the thing to take a look at is your sound quality. It sounds a little echo-y? Good luck!
Thank you for sharing. The quality of the recording is great. I wonder if it sounds flat because the sentences don’t seem connected to each other? Your voice is terrific, and I wonder if just a bit more flow would make it more dynamic? Good luck!
Hello! Posting two practice commercials by our 10 year old. The first one is a bit longer than her usual practice scripts. The second one is a swing at engaging and enticing the listener to stick around and watch.
Open to any and all feedback. Thank you!
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Hershey Park Christmas Candyland
Hershey Park Christmas Candylane is bigger and brighter than ever! New this year experience twice as many lights and holiday riders on Superdooperlooper, Wildcat, Cocoa Cruiser and Laff Track.
As always, enjoy your favorite traditions including a visit to Santa and his nine live reindeer, a dazzling choreographed light show, ice skating, festive entertainment, and delicious holiday treats.
Later, don’t forget to drive over to Hershey Sweet Lights for two miles of festive displays from the comfort of your car. Start planning your family’s visit today and discover your Hershey Park happy.
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Discovery Kids
What’s as strong as an elephant? Stinks like a skunk? And can see in the dark? Find out next on Discovery Kids!
Hi Sarah. Thanks for sharing. I’m with Alexis in terms of interpretation feedback. I might suggest keeping an eye on your levels. It sounded pretty quiet to me, while I was listening.
Hi Alexis. I thought this was really great. Your voice really matched what I imagined I would be listening to in this sort of thing. I didn’t hear any background noise; however, your “s” were a bit harsh. Hope that helps.
Hi Alexis. This was really great. Thank you! The only thing I might explore is the perhaps play with the “liveliness” of the reading. Maybe have a bit more playful vibe to go with the warm and approachable?
Hello! Here are two practice recordings of our 10 year old daughter. We were working on emotion and being more “in character.” Thank you for any feedback!
BOT Character
1. (angry) “Those jerks camped our spot again! C’mon, let’s get ’em!”
2. (enthused) “You’re a freaking genius, Ryan! There’s no way we’ll lose!”
3. (denial, fear, facing real danger) “No, no, no! This can’t be happening right now!”The Princess and the Frog
The princess went to her room and laid down on her bed. The slimy frog jumped on the bed and said, “Now you must kiss me good night! “Yuck!”, thought the princes, she didn’t want to kiss an u**y old frog.
