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Not bad! I feel like you were slurring your words together, and could use a bit more energy in your reads. But, despite that, I felt like your reading was pretty clear!
I really like this one! You sound like an all knowing oracle or genie coming to me about changing the past, haha. Very smooth and it drew me in!
I really like the ziploc one! You have lots of energy. Maybe it was a little fast, and I think the energy you bring, while fun, doesn’t quite fit the Purina one. But maybe that’s just me!
I have three more examples here — the last one was completely for fun. I was looking through the PSA section in the script library and thought I’d take a crack at it! Hope it’s not cringe, haha
Here’s a short political ad!
Script:
Jobs are leaving the state in record numbers while John Jacobson continues to be an outspoken advocate for outsourcing.
Keep jobs where they belong – in-state.
Vote Nadine Ronald for a better economic future!
Paid for by Nadine Ronald for Governor.I really like the tone you have as well as the energy you bring! I can definitely picture you being on the radio or TV doing an ad. Keep up the amazing work! And the version with music sounds even more engaging, really!
These sound wonderful! I think if you speak more clearly and with more passion, it would really shine. Right now, I feel like the AMEX and Invesco ones were just being read to yourself. Speaking up out and loud with more energy would really promote this to the next level!
I love the way you sound! It’s very warm and cheerful and I can hear the smile in your voice when you read it. I think there could be a bit more pause between certain sentences, as it sounded a little rushed. Especially in the LEGO and Alzheimer’s scripts, some more space between sentences would allow me to absorb the information. But really, I love these readings!
