[chennianen]

Not bad! I feel like you were slurring your words together, and could use a bit more energy in your reads. But, despite that, I felt like your reading was pretty clear!

[chennianen]

I really like this one! You sound like an all knowing oracle or genie coming to me about changing the past, haha. Very smooth and it drew me in!

[chennianen]

I really like the ziploc one! You have lots of energy. Maybe it was a little fast, and I think the energy you bring, while fun, doesn’t quite fit the Purina one. But maybe that’s just me!

[chennianen]

I have three more examples here — the last one was completely for fun. I was looking through the PSA section in the script library and thought I’d take a crack at it! Hope it’s not cringe, haha

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[chennianen]

Got two files here — emotional stuff isn’t my forte but I gave it my best shot!

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[chennianen]

Here’s a short political ad!

Script:
Jobs are leaving the state in record numbers while John Jacobson continues to be an outspoken advocate for outsourcing.
Keep jobs where they belong – in-state.
Vote Nadine Ronald for a better economic future!
Paid for by Nadine Ronald for Governor.

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[chennianen]

I really like the tone you have as well as the energy you bring! I can definitely picture you being on the radio or TV doing an ad. Keep up the amazing work! And the version with music sounds even more engaging, really!

[chennianen]

These sound wonderful! I think if you speak more clearly and with more passion, it would really shine. Right now, I feel like the AMEX and Invesco ones were just being read to yourself. Speaking up out and loud with more energy would really promote this to the next level!

[chennianen]

I love the way you sound! It’s very warm and cheerful and I can hear the smile in your voice when you read it. I think there could be a bit more pause between certain sentences, as it sounded a little rushed. Especially in the LEGO and Alzheimer’s scripts, some more space between sentences would allow me to absorb the information. But really, I love these readings!

[chennianen]

Your pacing is really good here, it doesn’t sound like you’re rushing at all and I can hear everything clearly — Macallan one especially. The important words are highlighted, there is plenty of variation in speaking, and my attention was held throughout. Nice work!

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