[Chance Arthur]

One more that I was working on this morning! I have a bad habit of saying “yer/fer/tuh” instead of “your/for/to” so that was what I was working on with this script. It felt like I was over-enunciating, but that’s why I’m bringing it to the community for feedback! 🙂

YOUR SMILE

Your smile says a lot about you. If you let it. When you’re uncomfortable about your teeth, it’s easy to hold back your smile. Invisalign’s advanced technology now lets you straighten your teeth invisibly – so you can express yourself fully. And because they’re invisible, no one has to know about it. Hundreds of thousands of people already have discovered Invisalign. Maybe it’s time you were one of them.

Thanks

Chance

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[Chance Arthur]

Good call! Thanks for the input! Listening back I can definitely hear what you are referencing. That’s something I will definitely work on is keeping that image in my head of who I am having a conversation with!

Thanks again!

[Chance Arthur]

Hi everyone,

I’m throwing in a commercial script for some feedback.

LEGOS

My child has quite an imagination. His teachers say that some day he’ll be doing great things. Right now, he’s already an architect, a designer, an engineer … I think he’s a creative genius … and thanks to Legos, the creative building toy, there’s just no limit to what he can do. LEGOS … the creative diversion that helps develop a child’s potential.

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