[cbehrens]

Any feedback on conversational style or point of view are appreciated! Thanks!

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[cbehrens]

Your reads have a nice flow and pacing! When comparing each of these, perhaps think about the specific emotional tone or point of view for each to create more distinction between each read — just a thought. Sounds great!

[cbehrens]

I think your overall read aligns with a conversational feeling; I appreciate your inflection on the word “grooviest”! One thing just to keep in mind may be to play with saying repetitive words like “cool” in different ways, offering more variation. Great job!

[cbehrens]

Hello! I’m working on a more conversational read, so any feedback is welcome. Thanks! Courtney

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[cbehrens]

Great read! A thought I had would be to add in more of your perspective — what feeling would you imagine the listener experiencing related to this copy?

[cbehrens]

Great reads! One thought I had may be to try out different patterns or variations of pitch.

[cbehrens]

Hello! I am just getting more practice with commercial scripts; any feedback is welcome.
Thanks!
Courtney

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[cbehrens]

Any performance-related feedback is welcome! Thanks!

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[cbehrens]

I understood your point of view and tone throughout the read! The imagery that resulted from your read was great, too!

[cbehrens]

I thought all three of your narrations were clear — well done! It sounded as if you might have been expressing a smile along with the “welcome” statement in the final narration, which matched the tone of a welcome message.

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