[cbadloc]

Okay, about to have my last coaching session so wanted to see how these turned out after getting some earlier feedback.

[cbadloc]

Voice and tone sound really good though not sure if it would be considered “conversational”, but I’m not an expert. I would say “Meet Owen Larue” could be used with a different inflection perhaps? Again, I’m not an expert so it could be perfect for all I know.

[cbadloc]

Creative feedback only. No studio set up yet

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[cbadloc]

I thought your tone was perfect for the John Deere ad and sounded pretty d**n good to me. I would say the same tone maybe doesn’t work as well for the cool FM ad but still sounds good. Both ads sound really good but voice/tone works better for the JDeere ad is my point.

[cbadloc]

I’m just starting this so bit of an amateur giving feedback but would say your 2nd part of the Travel ad seemed more polished or smooth than the beginning. Still, nice tone throughout, but perhaps the latter part was a bit more smooth than the beginning. Not that the beginning was bad, just more smooth in latter part of ad.

[cbadloc]

Okay, here’s another. Creative feedback only. Short 15 second ad for upcoming class session next week

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Okay, think I figured it out. Just a short 15 second audio. Have a coaching session next week. Creative feedback only. No in house studio just yet. Thanks!

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[cbadloc]

Okay, going to see if this works. No recording studio so just creative feedback only, thanks!

[cbadloc]

Did this recording on my desktop so no home studio going on just yet. So, creative feedback only. Thank you!

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