[Bwatts]

I thought this to be a smooth clip. If I can offer any advice it would be to modify the pitch a little. Hope this helps.

[Bwatts]

Hi. I’d love some creative only feedback. I’m working on pacing, pitch and a conversational delivery. I appreciate your time.

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[Bwatts]

You have a calming voice but to my ears the sound drops off at the end of your sentences. Try to bring energy to these end of sentence words.

[Bwatts]

Hi. I’d appreciate any creative feedback re pace, diction, flow, etc. Thanks.

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[Bwatts]

Hi. I would appreciate any creative feedback re pace, diction, flow, etc. Thanks

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