[brendiginette]

Hello everybody! I’m a newbie looking for some feedback on these scripts. My main focuses are: keeping good pace, avoiding micro pauses, and to not pitch down at the end of every sentence.

Any and all feedback will be greatly appreciated! Thank you community!

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[brendiginette]

Hi Dillon,

The clarity of your speech and the enunciation of words was great. It was very clear and easy to understand.

I loved the personality you brought to the Ancient Mysteries piece. However, it did sound a bit read-y. Maybe sounding more conversational and less robotic would improve the read?

For the 9-Planets script, it might be improved if it sounded more engaging. Again, to my ear it sounded like you were reading it and did not sound natural.

Other than that, great work!

[brendiginette]

Hi everyone,

Uploading two scripts for review. I am a but congested in my sinuses, so please ignore that aspect of the recording.

I would love your feedback on these reads! Thank you!

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