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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #81462
    becksflatt
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    Hi again. I’m back with a quicker read of the Greek vacation narration bit I posted the other day. Curious if this feels like a good middle ground as far as pace goes. I tend to read on the faster side and sometimes overcorrect in the opposite direction. I’ve added a few others I’m working on for my demo. I’m using Izotope De-esser and De-click very lightly on all of these which are new to my setup. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81404
    becksflatt
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    Hi everybody. I’m practicing for my narration demo and would love some feedback on this one. How’s the pace / is it conversational / any technical issues? Thanks!

    • This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by becksflatt. Reason: grammatical error
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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81400
    becksflatt
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    nice! both of these really show off your warm inviting tone

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81355
    becksflatt
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    These are really engaging! Hooked on Phonics has such a great inviting feel to it. When listening to Aruba, your voice sounds great but I think I wanted to see the picturesque views in the read. Like listening to a friend who just got back from the best trip of their life.

    I also struggle with extra saliva and am still exploring options for that. Lately, I’ve been popping in a honey throat lozenge before recording and it seems to thicken the saliva so it isn’t so noisy.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81354
    becksflatt
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    Really nice reads on all of these! They all seem to be at a good volume but Social Security was a little bit quiet. If the gain was the same for all 4 takes you may have been a little far from the mic? I know I sometimes back away from the mic when I’m concerned about mouth sounds so I don’t know if maybe that was a factor here. Even still, not so quiet that it couldn’t do with a little boost in whatever software you’re recording with.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #80692
    becksflatt
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    Wow, what a great voice! The first read has a seriously great vibe but I think I prefer the second read. It has a more varied pitch range which gave it some extra intrigue.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #80689
    becksflatt
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    I think the diction and pacing are great on both of these! The only thing that jumped out at me is that the first one could be a little bit louder. Great job!

    • This reply was modified 1 year, 11 months ago by becksflatt.
    • This reply was modified 1 year, 11 months ago by becksflatt.
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