Hello everyone! Trying out the recording studio (hope the sound quality is up to s***f) and rerecorded PURINA based on the feedback to be brighter and peppier. Not sure if enough. Also uploading BIG CATS as a way different read. Would appreciate any and all feedback – thank you!
I agree with Emily that your voice is very pleasant and calming to listen to and that the pacing was good. It felt like “for the natural world” and the following word “when” should connect more? Or is it a whole new sentence? And I agree that the last sentence could use a bit more urgency or some kind of feeling since this is about saving nature. Hope this helps!
Wow! That sounded like something i would hear on the radio today! The very first time I heard it, I didn’t catch the first two words but the second time heard it no problem. Hope this helps!
I thought the pacing was great on all of them. Tone wise, and I don’t know if this is bc of the recording quality, but I like FISH-part-1.mp3 the best. It sounded more authentic than FISH-part-2.mp3 and other recordings like it. Hope this helps!
Thank you thank you for the feedback!!! Really appreciate it. And I’ll try to add some more “cushion” to my closet sound booth to reduce the echo. Thank you again!
Thank you thank you for the feedback! I will definitely try to sound even happier w the Purina one. And will also work on the echo-y sound of my “booth” which is a closet. =)
In the Aspen recording, the first phrase sounded questioning instead of confident and reassuring to my newbie ears. Really liked the Pilsbury take. It was light, bright and and ending was fun.
I’m new to the VO world so take my response w a grain of salt but I thought it sounded great! Maybe it’s the background music you expertly chose but I can totally picture the battle-weary, cynical detective. =)