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Hi Tina. Great read. Your words were clear and diction was good. There was one section that sounded muddled which was pointed out above (“to try”). There is also emphasis on “designed” that stood out among that sentence. The pace is a bit slow for me but I am one of those people who speeds up playback on videos. Nice voice and good work. Best, Kristen
Hi Mary. I enjoyed the Sam Adams read. There was personality in your voice and I heard two quiet laughs. Great read. Best, Kristen
Hi Mary. Great work. I liked the third read best out of all three. As a fellow southerner, I can hear a bit of an accent on certain words. For example, “right” and “back” in the script are drawn out. I tend to do this as well at the end of a sentence. Otherwise, you were convincing and friendly at the same time. Very authentic. I hope this feedback helps. Best, Kristen
Hi Mark! Fellow workshop attendee here… I listened to all three of your reads and I must say your voice has great range. I especially thought the third read for the toy was the best. If i were listening on the radio without seeing what you were selling, i would want to look it up when i got home especially if i were a kid. Great work! The only feedback I would give would be on the background music. It’s a nice touch but i had a hard time hearing you over some parts of it. Best, Kristen
Hi! I am in the workshop as well and thought I would provide some feedback. I listened to the JCPenny read. It sounds like you were more casual and comfortable toward the end of the read. Your energy was higher and there was more variation in your voice. Excited even! If you start with that same energy, this would make me want to go to the sale as a listener. Great work!
