Audrea23
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Thank you so much! Words Can Do Anything was challenging for me – I wasn’t sure what the mood “should” be and the “happy” things, in the beginning, were very confusing with the more somber things detailed at the end. I’m going to take your feedback to my Coach so I can work on the areas you pointed out. I definitely prefer eLearning and telephony but I want to improve in other areas and your comments were VERY helpful!
Hello everyone –
First time posting to the forum and looking for some feedback on my pacing as well as my tone. I’m definitely more comfortable with the eLearning and IVR, I also wanted to try my hand at something different from my preferred genre (Words Can Do Anything mp3) and would love to hear feedback on ways I can improve.
Note: I do not have my home studio fully set up yet, but if you have technical and/or creative input I’d appreciate it!Great job! I enjoyed each of these and could feel myself relaxing into your steps and envisioning myself following along. While I have a fan on at the moment, I didn’t notice the AC at all. If the sound was present it did not distract me from being able to focus on your directions.
Absolutely loved listening to this, and truly felt I was immersed in an actual radio/tv commercial.
I would consider pausing ever so slightly longer (for half a second) between your transition from How do you get clean…to At RiseWell
The pacing/cadence on “as effective as a chemical clean” seems different from the rest of the recording; however; it works well with this product/advertisement.
