artyom123
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nice demo and good character selection and leaning into the character. my only advice is that I couldn’t make out some of what the characters were saying. it seems like they are either screaming, or ultra calm. I would take those same characters and see what they sound like in a conversational tone. good luck !
Hello, Would love to head if I emotionally connected to the script to deliver it’s message, and what I could do to further deepen my emotional connection to the read and bering it more to life. Thanks!
Script 1:
With people gravitating to the newest craft bourbons, Marker’s Mark needed to connect to new audiences beyond conventional whiskey drinkers. Maker’s Mark needed to rethink authenticity to include other people’s origin stories, not just its own.Script 2:
If you’re managing contractors to service, support, repair, upgrade, and maintain the equipment, vehicles and other assets you have, you’re used to complexity.
On any given day, any given piece of work requires different people, skills, and hours – and it’s all changing all the time.SAP Fieldglass Assignment Management provides an elegant solution to a complex problem. Learn more about it on Fieldglass.com.
I agree, very clear articulation and pleasant smooth voice. What this could use more of is a deep emotional connection like your empathizing with someone.
I think it sounds great in the low register, very authoritative. What can be added is to make it more conversational. try a lead in… like your trying to help a friend get over a hurdle and you have the perfect solution which is Advil. I hope this helps
I love your clarity and humble sounding voice that is kind welcoming. I think this read need more of an amazement factor tailored with a solution. Pretend telling someone that you just came across an amazing new discovery and proceed with the read.
Hello all, still working on my emotion connection – story telling. Would love feedback on my read of this script:
One of the biggest threats to my company’s operations was the way we managed risk. Our risk management system was spread over multiple platforms, which caused a lot of information gaps and siloed data and communications among our teams. Then Risk and Compliance came in. By relying on their expertise, our risk management system became an asset instead of a source of complexity.
Please comment on my emotional connection to the text.. an area i’m struggling in and would appreciate any advice. Thanks so much community!
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At Company Name, we define our legacy through the impact we make on people’s lives.We’ve challenged the status quo…
focusing on helping people achieve financial well-being.
