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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #82964
    Artist7
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    Thanks for listening, aemanimate! I appreciate your helpful feedback!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #82963
    Artist7
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    Hello! Both of your reads sound great! The only feedback I have is for “Swan-Ganz.” The words “is” “to” and “present” all seem to run together. I would slow down the pace just a bit in order to pronounce them each distinctly.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #82949
    Artist7
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    Hello-I’ve uploaded two practice scripts, I’d really appreciate some feedback on pace and whether the reads sound conversational. Thanks in advance!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81813
    Artist7
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    Hi,Everyone!

    Would appreciate feedback on pace and whether my tone sounds conversational. Thanks in advance!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81146
    Artist7
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    Hi, Unity-

    The overall read was good. Two things.. your words seemed to run together at “your” and “child”….sounded like “chore child.” Also sounded like you were “reading” towards the end (“Brought to you by Autism Speaks…..”).

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #81142
    Artist7
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    Hi, Everyone-

    I would appreciate some feedback (no technical/production related comments) for these two homework recordings, especially around overall flow. Thanks for your time!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #80659
    Artist7
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    Hi, Marioh5, overall, your tone is nice. Regarding the motivation meditation, imagine you’re speaking directly to/engaging with the person and less like like you’re reading to them. In terms of the public service read, sounded fine until the last few seconds where it sounded as though you were reading.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #80656
    Artist7
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    Hi, Everyone! I’m submitting a couple of practice reads for a homework assignment where I’m working on pace. I’d definitely appreciate feedback on that aspect. Thanks so much for your time!

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79961
    Artist7
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    Thank you, latyesemca for the positive helpful feedback! I will try to incorporate these good tips during my practice reads!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #79960
    Artist7
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    Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and provide the positive feedback, Silver Wit!

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