[Artist7]

Hi, Everyone-

I would appreciate some feedback (no technical/production related comments) for these two homework recordings, especially around overall flow. Thanks for your time!

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[Artist7]

Hi, Marioh5, overall, your tone is nice. Regarding the motivation meditation, imagine you’re speaking directly to/engaging with the person and less like like you’re reading to them. In terms of the public service read, sounded fine until the last few seconds where it sounded as though you were reading.

[Artist7]

Hi, Everyone! I’m submitting a couple of practice reads for a homework assignment where I’m working on pace. I’d definitely appreciate feedback on that aspect. Thanks so much for your time!

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[Artist7]

Thank you, latyesemca for the positive helpful feedback! I will try to incorporate these good tips during my practice reads!

[Artist7]

Thanks so much for taking the time to listen and provide the positive feedback, Silver Wit!

[Artist7]

Thanks for the positive, helpful feedback, latyesemca! Will try to incorporate the good tips during the next read!

[Artist7]

Donnamichelle444 Overall, your read sounded good. Two items to note: In a couple of places (specifically the words “need” and “included”), the “d” sound is dropped from the word endings. You might also want to pick up the pace slightly.

[Artist7]

Thanks for the positive feedback Donnamichelle444-I really appreciate it!

[Artist7]

All the recordings sound very professional. Your delivery is very engaging on each one of the recordings. In addition, you have a good, diverse range with your voices, which I think makes you very marketable.

[Artist7]

I like that your delivery on both were attention-grabbing. Your pitch and tone were also nice.

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