[Artist7]

Hi, everyone- I’ve uploaded two practice reads that I’d appreciate some feedback on. Thanks so much!

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[Artist7]

Hi, BJ- I thought both reads were very good, and yes, there is vocal variety! My only suggestion would be to slow down the pacing for both reads, especially the “Reading to Write.” Good job!

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[Artist7]

Hi, BJ- Thanks for the helpful feedback! I really appreciate it!

[Artist7]

Good evening! Here are two commercial practice reads I would like some feedback on. Thanks!

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[Artist7]

Thanks, Veronica-much appreciated!!

[Artist7]

Hello! I would appreciate some feedback on these two commercial practice reads. Thanks in advance!

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[Artist7]

I agree with your coach. Perhaps it’s the breath sounds at .040 and .048 respectively that distract from the read for me.

[Artist7]

Thank you for your thoughtful feedback-it was very helpful!

[Artist7]

Hi, RCampos!The read was very good! Just a couple of suggestions: “He’s taking salsa lessons as a surprise for his wife” needs to be smoothed out a bit, as it sounds like you’re reading the script. Would also suggest delivering “He’s back!” with a bit more enthusiasm (sounds like the script itself is about relief from back pain?) Also, if this is one continuous script, would recommend using the same background music throughout…..almost sounds like two separate reads. Hope this helps!

[Artist7]

Hi! Good read overall! I seem to be picking up on some breath sounds. Would work on controlling them during the read and also editing them from future recordings.

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