[Artist7]

Hello! I would appreciate some feedback on these two commercial practice reads. Thanks in advance!

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[Artist7]

I agree with your coach. Perhaps it’s the breath sounds at .040 and .048 respectively that distract from the read for me.

[Artist7]

Thank you for your thoughtful feedback-it was very helpful!

[Artist7]

Hi, RCampos!The read was very good! Just a couple of suggestions: “He’s taking salsa lessons as a surprise for his wife” needs to be smoothed out a bit, as it sounds like you’re reading the script. Would also suggest delivering “He’s back!” with a bit more enthusiasm (sounds like the script itself is about relief from back pain?) Also, if this is one continuous script, would recommend using the same background music throughout…..almost sounds like two separate reads. Hope this helps!

[Artist7]

Hi! Good read overall! I seem to be picking up on some breath sounds. Would work on controlling them during the read and also editing them from future recordings.

[Artist7]

Hello! I would really appreciate some feedback on these two reads. Thanks so much!

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[Artist7]

Hello! I would definitely appreciate some feedback on these two reads. Thanks in advance!

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[Artist7]

Hello, everyone! I’d really appreciate some feedback on these two reads! As always, thanks so much!!

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[Artist7]

The recording sounds great! I think that you could emphasize or do a slight “play on words” at the end with the words “no strings attached.”

[Artist7]

I really appreciate the feedback! Also, many thanks for the feedback on the audio quality, as I’ve been working on that, too!

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