Angela Doyle
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Hello everyone. Here’s my homework for my next coaching session. I’d love to hear from you specifically as to whether you felt like I connected with you sufficiently. Other feedback (besides technical) is definitely welcome as well! Thank you.
Also, I’d like to hear what adjectives you’d use to describe my voice. Thanks so much!
Excedrin:
Aside from the mispronunciation (I’m pretty sure it’s pronounced “Ex-CED-rin”), I liked your read. I could totally relate/connect with what you were saying. One nit: I’d add a beat between “go away” and “There is a solution”. I like your tone. Very well-suited to the spot.Carnation:
Add a beat between “change the world around us” and “Packed with protein…” The way it is now (jammed up together a bit) makes me think you’re still talking about changing the world… Again, I like your tone. Well-suited.Brevard College–your tone felt more jovial than I would think an informational spot on a higher educational institution would need. I liked how your read was very clear.
There definitely is an echo in both. I’d clean things up a bit and remove the breaths. It might be me, but they’re a bit distracting.
I like your voice, but with Ancient Mysteries, I felt that there were quite a number of ups and downs in the read. It was a bit singsong-y and felt almost like you were reading a children’s book while I was looking for a lower, more mysterious read given the title.
Good job on Pawncast.
I can’t seem to delete the Biogenetics Law read and replace it with a better one! Please disregard that one and listen to this one.
Hi! I’m new to Edge and to this feedback forum. I just started narration coaching sessions with Edge after completing a round of commercial sessions (and demo reel creation) with the competitor. =)
I’d love to get creative feedback (not technical–still working on improving my home studio) on these 2 reads please. My friends and family think my work is solid, but it’d be great to get input from people who are in the industry. Is it smooth? Does my voice grab you right from the start and keep you interested throughout? How could I improve my reads?
Thanks in advance!
